The Pink Sky

Posted on May 24, 2007 by grace

One day in robot land,Paulina and Dona went walking to robot school. Every day,when the sky was always pink,Dona went out to tan……finish this story.

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5 Responses to The Pink Sky

  1. Zhangxupage says:
    May 24, 2007 at 7:44 pm

    Can you write something about you and your life?

  2. grace says:
    May 25, 2007 at 5:02 pm

    I like art & reading.I’m a child and in grade one.I will love things that are sparkly and fashin.

  3. Zhangxupage says:
    May 26, 2007 at 5:15 pm

    I think you should put spaces after commas.

  4. Zhangxupage says:
    May 26, 2007 at 5:15 pm

    Also, sometimes you forget to put spaces after periods.

  5. Coco says:
    August 24, 2009 at 2:09 am

    Grace, do you know who is Zhangxupage?

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